always dieing in a huge blood-bath because of some guy who isn't as he looks.
i whatched this a year ago on youtube... it scared me away from youtube for months! XD
I screamed when I saw my name..... but i realized it must be a fake because i haven't even uploaded something yet.....
you know what,
I can't take this type of stuff.
First of all you need to make the lips move in a realistic way instead of making it look like he blabs every syllable as a word like cat.
Also you need to animate less choppy. you need to make little change between frames otherwise you can tell which is a frame's beginning and which is the next.
You need to change the art. I might suggest using the line tool instead of paint. Though it's just my idea.
And finally, work on your voice acting. You sound like your talking to a 1st grader.
That's all the constructive criticism i'll give you. Good luck, and i hope you take this seriousely.
my favorite thing is how Tom's expression never changes.
i'd have to say
you didn't do bad. great first!
its like one of the three things that had me litterally ROFLing.
a few problems:
1. it wasn't funny
2. It didn't make a lick of sence
3. It was poorly animated
i hate you it was named "sandford LOL" beacause sandford spin got blammed
i have something good to say and something bad to say.
Newgrounds should have stuff like a bunch of pictures going by.
Its a fine show though.
Newgrounds is for flash, not a pointless thing drawn on paper instead of with a tablet or flash. i hate it when people make these things, like the the previouse turd of the week. a video of some kid beating up a girl with bad acting.
Newgrounds is a place for great flash videos and games. upload this to youtube if you want, but not a flash site.
So if you want to make some cool stuff and entertain people on newgrounds, make something with flash.
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