poor timmy
always dieing in a huge blood-bath because of some guy who isn't as he looks.
poor timmy
always dieing in a huge blood-bath because of some guy who isn't as he looks.
lol
i whatched this a year ago on youtube... it scared me away from youtube for months! XD
you know what,
I can't take this type of stuff.
First of all you need to make the lips move in a realistic way instead of making it look like he blabs every syllable as a word like cat.
Also you need to animate less choppy. you need to make little change between frames otherwise you can tell which is a frame's beginning and which is the next.
You need to change the art. I might suggest using the line tool instead of paint. Though it's just my idea.
And finally, work on your voice acting. You sound like your talking to a 1st grader.
That's all the constructive criticism i'll give you. Good luck, and i hope you take this seriousely.
LOL
my favorite thing is how Tom's expression never changes.
i'd have to say
you didn't do bad. great first!
good!
its like one of the three things that had me litterally ROFLing.
hmmm.....
a few problems:
1. it wasn't funny
2. It didn't make a lick of sence
3. It was poorly animated
i hate you it was named "sandford LOL" beacause sandford spin got blammed
well,
i have something good to say and something bad to say.
BAD:
Newgrounds should have stuff like a bunch of pictures going by.
GOOD:
Its a fine show though.
review
This is very well animated and it really connects to me. It fills me with suspence because the good animating helped me pay attention to this and the good plot helped me feel emotional during it.
So my feelings in a nutshell are: great, 5/5 10/10
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